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四个孩子,正在植树。近处的女孩用手将树扶住,男孩手执铁铲,将铲起的泥土培上树身。两人边干活,边在乐,憧憬着将来树木成荫的美好时光。远处的两个女孩在为新植的树苗扎上木桩。
Description of Boy and Girl in the Foreground(对近处的男孩和女孩的描述)
1.A boy and girl are planting a tree.
2.They are visualizing that one day these trees will grow up and become a forest.
3.The boy is filling in the hole with a longhandled spade.
4.The girl is putting the tree in the hole as he fills it in.
5.She is making sure that the tree is standing upright.
6.Behind the boy is a watering-can that they will use to water the tree after it is planted.
7.Behind the little girl is a tree that they have just finished planting.
8.Above them flies a little bird.
9.The bird seems very happy that one day these trees will be tall.
10.Maybe the bird will make a nest,a home,in one of them.
第三句“The boy is filling in the hole with a long-handled spade.”的句意是“男孩子正在用一把长柄铁铲用泥土将坑填满。”
请看有关这位男孩的细节描写:
The boy has thick tousled hair and a wide smile on his face.
这男孩头发蓬乱,脸上却笑得很开心。
He is wearing a long-sleeved jacket,buttoned up to the collar.
他穿着一件长袖外套,纽扣从下到上全都扣着。
He is using a spade to fill in the hole where the tree is planted.
他正用铲子将刚种好树的坑填满。
连续表达时,可增加一句引子,句子结构也可略作调整。
A happy boy and girl are busy planting a young tree.The boy has thick tousled hair and a wide smile on his face.He is wearing a long-sleeved jacket,buttoned up to the collar,striped trousers,and shoes.With both hands,he is using a spade to fill in the hole that had been dug previously for the tree.Beside him is the watering-can for use.
第四句“The girl is putting the tree in the hole as he fills it in.”的句意是“女孩正扶着树,好让男孩培土。”
下面几句是有关这位女孩的细节描写:
The girl is holding the tree steady while the boy plants it.
男孩植树时,这个女孩将这棵树扶正扶稳。
Her hair is tied with bows.
她的头发上系着蝴蝶结。
She has short bangs on her forehead.
她的前额上飘着一丝短短的刘海。
Her plain trousers have a double stitch mark down the side。
她单色的裤子两边各有一条双针脚痕迹。
Her shoes are striped black and white.
她的鞋子呈黑色条纹状。
做连续表达时,可以加一些评论,文字亦可稍作增改:
The girl is holding the tree steady while the boy plants it.She also has a big smile on her face.Her hair is tied with bows,in"bunches"at each side of her head.She has a short straggly fringe on her forehead,and she is wearing a long-sleeved roll-neck top,dotted with a flower pattern.Her plain trousers have a double stitch mark down the side of the leg,and her shoes are striped black and white.They appear to be very happy,Perhaps the trees they are planting will one day become a forest.Behind the girl is a tree that has already been planted,and above them is a little bird overseeing the procedure.
Description of the Two Girls in the Background(对远处的两个女孩的描述)
1.A girl on the left is kneeling on the ground on one knee.
2.She is smiling while she is supporting the stake and holding the tree in place.
3.Behind her is a newly planted tree,nicely staked.
4.Next to her stands another girl who has a short skirt on.
5.Her hair is tied in two plaits.
6.She is tying a rope carefully round the tree and the stake.
7.She wears a long-sleeved roll-neck sweater that has a star pattern on it.
8.She also wears a pleated skirt and a pair of black boots.
9.They are working together.
第一句“A girl on the left is kneeling on the ground on knee.”的句意是“左边的女孩正单腿跪在地上。”
我们来对她做一个更为详细的描述:
The girl on the left has dark shout hair parted in the center.
左边的女孩头发短而黑,从中间一分为二。
She kneels on one knee to supportthe stake.
她单腿跪下,以扶住桩子。
She wears a patterned long-sleeved roll-neck jacket.
她穿一件印着图案的长袖翻领外衣。
然后再尝试着做一个连续表达:
Nearby are two girls staking a newly planted tree.The girl on the left has dark short hair parted in the center and bangs in the front.She is smiling and talking as she kneels on one knee to support the stake.She wears a patterned long-sleeved roll-neck jacket with plain trousers and shoes.Behind her there is a newly planted tree nicely staked.
第四句“Next to her stands another girl who has a short skirt on.”的句意是“她身边站着一位穿着短裙子的姑娘。”显然,这是指右面的那位女孩。我们现在来描述她:
Ihe girl on the right has her dark hair tied in two plaits.
右边的女孩将一头黑发扎成了两根辫子。
She holds the stake to the tree prior to tying the rope.
她将固定树苗的桩子扶正,然后准备系上绳子。
She wears a long-sleeved roll-neck sweater.
她穿一件长袖翻领套衫。
再来做一个连续表达:
The other girl has her dark hair tied in two plaits,and she is also in smiling conversation with her friend as she holds the stake to the tree prior to tying the rope carefully round both the tree and the stake.This girl wears a long-sleeved roll-neck sweater that has a star pattern on it,a pleated skirt,and short black boots.
Comment(评论)
1.The boy and the girl in the foreground are obviously finding great enjoyment in working in the open air.
2.They are doing a task that stimulates their imagination,as they talk about the forest of trees that might result in time from their work.
3.The two girls in the background are very happily chatting about the good work they are doing.
4.Putting in stakes is quite an important task since strong winds can disturb the roots of newly planted trees.
5.It makes a difference to plant just one tree.
6.Everything we do for our environment and for our earth makes a difference.
第二句“They are doing a task that stimulates their imagination as they talk about the forest of trees that might result in time from theirwork.”的句意是“他们一边参加能激发他们想象的劳动,一边谈论着他们的劳动迟早会造就的一片树林。”
In time表示“迟早”,又如:
In time you will learn everything.
总有一天你会明白一切的。
You will better understand in time the importance of hard work.
你对艰苦工作的重要性迟早会有更深刻的理解。
第五句“It makes a difference to plant just one tree.”的句意是“即使植一棵树也不同寻常。”
Make a difference意为“改观”,“不一样”,含褒义,又如:
Many people don't just want a job to earn money;they want a job that will make a difference.
许多人工作不是为了赚钱,而是为了能一显身手。
The reason that I wrote this article is that I wanted to make a difference.
我写这篇文章的原因是想做得与众不同。
实例
Sample 1
It is important that children be involved in environmental issues.In this picture,the children are laughing and discussing their work with great interest,perhaps thinking of how the trees will look once they mature and maybe grow into a forest.They seem to be excited to be working on a project that will provide food,shelter,and shade for animals and wildlife.Planting trees is strenuous exercise but enjoyable,especially as it is easy to see what has been accomplished.These children are learning the importance of trees to the environment and will understand how long it takes a big tree to grow and how quickly it can be cut down.Hopefully they are learning about the balance of nature and how planting trees helps to replace some of the forest that has already been destroyed.
Sample 2
Here we have a picture of a boy and girl planting trees.The boy is piling dirt around the base of the tree while the girl holds the tree up straight.They both seem very happy because they know that they are doing a good thing by planting a tree that will benefit our environment and society.Also,while they are working,they are thinking of the future and how pretty and useful the tree will be once it has grown tall.Even though it's hard work to plant trees,each tree gets them closer to the goal of creating a beautiful forest.There is a bird flying about the small tree they are planting;perhaps someday soon the tree will provide a home for this bird and many others.
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