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在书面表达中，不同的思想内容要用不同的句式来表达；而同一思想内容也可以用不同的句式来表达。句式不同，表达效果也就不好。只有句式多样化，文章才会生动有趣，充满活力。可是，在写作时学生往往一篇文章都是千篇一律的简单句，文章单调乏味，毫无生活。恰时地使用某些方法或手段有助于实际有达形式的多样化，增强表达效果。下面介绍几种常用方法。
一、句首少用人称代词，避免中式英语表达
句子开头，许多学生在写作中倾向于用与人有关系的词，用名词和代词作为句子的开头，如people,we,I,he,they,she等。但这种开头容易使句子写成中式英语，这样句式见多了，难免让人厌倦。试比较：
A.People throughout the country have greatly demanded all kinds of nutritious food.
B.There is a great demand across the country for all kinds of nutritious food.
第一句改用非人称名词作为主语开头，第二句则用there+be句型开头。这样既改变了主语＋谓语＋宾语单调句型，又把想强调的意思突出出来。实际上，为了把文章写得生动活泼，除了用主语开头外，还可以用句子的其他成分开头。
1.用副词开头
A.Students often stray into the habit of cheating on tests.
B.Too often,students stray into the habit of cheating on tests.
2.用状语开头
A.The house was dark and empty.So it looked very different from the way I remembered it.
B.Dark and empty,the house looked very different from the way I remembered it.
3.用表语开头
A.Intense interest plus persistent effort are equally essential to the highest success in learning a language.
B.Equally essential to the highest success in learning a language are intense interest plus persistent effort.
4.用宾语开头
A.Now that you wonld not listen to my advice and you laughed at my helps,you will have what you asked for.
B.My advice you would not listen to:my helps you laughed at.Now you will have what you asked for.
5.以短语修饰语开头
(1)以介词短语开头：
A.I'm interested in the news but it bores my wife.
B.To me the news was very interesting,but to mywife very boring.
(2)以分词短语开头：
A.Since he was disturbed by the discord of American life in recent decades.Manchester tookf light for the pacific islands.
B.Disturbed by the discord of American life in recent decades,Manchester took flight for the pacific islands.
(3)以不定式短语开头：
A.If you wanted to pass the exam,you should work very hard.
B.To pass the exam,you should work very hard.
以上各组A、B句相比，A句的表达显得平淡乏味，B句生动有趣，充满活力，自然就能提高作文档次。
二、巧用连接词，增强语义连贯性
有的学生在写作中使用过多简单句，成了简单句的堆砌；有的写复杂句时，动辄用so,and,then,but,or,however,yet等非但达不到丰富表达方式的目的，反而使句子结构松散、呆板。为了避免这种现象，可以通过使用连接词，尤其是一些表示从属关系的连接词，如who,which,that,because,since,although,after,as,before,when,whenever,if,unless，as if等，不仅能够丰富句型，而且还能够把思想表达得更清楚，意义更连贯。例如：
Natural resources are very limited.They will be exhausted in the near future.It is not true.But it becomes a major concern around the world.This is a widely accepted fact.
这段文字用简单句表达，它们之间内在的逻辑关系含糊不清，意思支离破碎。如果使用连接词，将单句与其前后合并，形成主次关系，就把一个比较复杂的内容和关系表达得层次清楚、结构严谨。例如：
It is a widely accepted fact that there is a major concern around the world for the exhaustion of limited natural resources in the near future,though it is unlikely to be true.
再如：
The Mississippi River is one of the longest rivers in the World,and in spring time it often overflows its banks,and the liyes of many people are endangered.
此句用and把三个分句一贯到底，既乏味又可笑。如果使用了关系代词which，语义就会更连贯，语言也会更流畅：
The Mississippi River,which is one of the longest rivers in the world,often overflows its banks in the spring time,endangering the lives of many people.
三、长短句交替使用，体现表达节奏美
长句和短句是就句子的字数多少、形体长短而言的。长句和短句各有其优点和缺点。长句，因为使用的定语、状语较多，限制了概念的外延，增大了概念的内涵，所以比较精确、严密，但使用起来不够活泼简便。短句，由于字数少，直截了当，一般比较简洁、明快、有力，但不利于表达复杂的语义内容。在具体语言活动中，最好长短句交替使用。这既体现了节奏上的要求，也是意义上的需要。例如：
□We can imagine the beautiful surroundings.
□There are many trees along the streets.
□There is a clean river in the city.
□There are many fishes in the river.
□There are willow trees on the one side.
□There are some pieces of grassland on the other side.
□There are many flowers on them.
文中七个句子都是简单句，句型结构单一，而且句子长短同一，都在七、八词左右，十分单调。下面是修改后的段落：
□Just imagine the beautiful surroundings if we make our cities greener.
□Green trees linethe streets.
□A clean river winds through the city,in which a lot of fishes abound.
□On the one side stand rows of willow trees.
□On the other side lies a stretch of grassland svrinkled with many yellow and red flowers.
改写后的这段文字，有长句，也有短句，一长一短，抑扬顿挫的节奏感就出来了。不仅句子长短交插，而且句型结构变化也很大，使文章流畅自然，生动活泼。
下面结合以上所讲的“一、二、三”三部分，我们来看2002年高考英语全国卷作文答案：
Dear Editor,
I'm writing to tell you about the discussion we've had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks①.
Opinions are divided on the question.60% of the students are against the idea of entrance fees.②They believed a public park should be free of charge.People need a place where they can restand enjoy themselves.
③Charging entrance fees will no doubt keep some people away.What is more,it will become necessary to build gates.and walls,which will do harm to the appearance of a city.④
On the other hand,40%think that fees should be charged because you need money to pay gardeners and other workers and to buy plants and young trees.⑤They suggest,however,fee should be charged low.
Yours truly,
Li Hua
①本句使有了一个连接词引导，含有两个从句，主次关系分明，结构严谨，行文流畅自然。
②这部分连用两个简单句，字数不多，表达意思直截了当，简洁明快。
③接下来又是两个不长的复句，与①②两句以及③后面的简单句相对应，句子长短交插，抑扬顿挫，行文自然活泼。
④、⑤表现手法更是精妙，分别以插入语和介词短语开头，这种表达形式的多样化，大大增强表达效果。紧接着文章的结尾又是一个简单句，与⑤一长一短，节奏明快。
全文不到150个字，共九个句子，包含七从句，运用了我们上面所讲的多种表达手段，真可谓是一篇佳作，值得同学们借鉴。
总之，英语的句式是多种多样的，只要从要表达的内容出发合理选用，文章的句式就会富于变化。