高考英语胜利的书面表达_高考论文

高考英语胜利的书面表达_高考论文

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书面表达是高考中的重头戏,能体现考生的语言综合运用能力,但在高考紧张压力之下如何快速成就考场美文,这对很多考生来说是个令人头疼的问题。为此很多考生报怨:作文之难,难于上青天?然而凡事皆有其内在规律性,通其理,表其情,究其形,由表及里,形神俱备,优秀作文尽在我手。本文将从遣词、造句、连贯、谋篇、版面净洁五个方面全面阐述高考书面致胜之道。

一、卷面整洁化

卷面就像人的脸一样,它给阅卷人以第一视觉,因此印象最为深刻。书面表达也是如此,不论你运用了多么复杂的语法结构。多么高级的词汇以及行文多么紧凑连贯,如果卷面像一把乱草,则很难让阅卷人了解你的文采。阅卷人因此匆忙阅卷,走马观花,这样一来,你的心血白费,你的劳动无效。因此要求:书写规范,态度认真,字体工整,切莫乱涂乱划。与此同时还应注意版面设计美观大方,切莫写得到边到沿,这样会给人很堵的感觉;注意两边页面边距不要留得过大,只写在中间,那样不够美观。

二、词汇高级化

新的评价标准要求我们尽量使用高级词汇。一是张扬个性表现出与众不同,使人一看有一种新颖特别的感觉。二是高级词汇的选取和运用,使阅卷者对考生的英语功底有一定程度的了解。但高级词汇并不是越难越好,越长越好,主要是指那些大部分考生都想不到用且又符合英美国家表达习惯的方式,例如一些常规词的特殊用法,或是通过构词法而形成的词汇、复合词、名词用作动词,象声词等。

1.①A new railway is being built in my home town.

②A new railway is under construction in my home town.

2.①A strong storm happened in our city last night.

②A strong storm hit(struck)our city last night.

3.①Some of my classmates are for the movie.

②Some of my classmates are in favour of the movie.

上述各句中的①都是一般表述法,即大部分学生可能用到的,而②却与众不同,用词独到考究,更新活出众,更能显示你的遣词造句的语言才华。

三、文辞优美化

要想使所写的文章凸显文采,展示综合运用语言的能力,就要能写出几个漂亮的句子来,这就要求在乎时的学习过程中大量地积累课内外一切有用的习惯表达和典型的句子,如强调句、倒装句、虚拟句、感叹句、非谓语动词句型、it句型、with结构以及各种典型的从句等,真正做到句式多样,句型结构复杂,使用恰当得体,尽量避免使用结构单一、长度相同的单句,以免使所写文章平淡无奇,缺乏生气,读起来索然无味。

1.基本句型布大局,多种句型来交替

(1)①people can well use Internet Bars only in this way.

②Only in this way can Internet Bars be well used by people.

(2)①I suggest Internet Bars should be strictly managed and should direct young kids to surf the web.

②I suggest Internet Bars be under strict supervision and young kids be guided to surf the web.

(3)①I have found a house.It is 25 square meters.It has a bedroom,a bathroom and a kitchen.

②I have found a small flat of 25 square meters,with a bedroom,a bathroom and a kitchen.

2.凭关系、并列、复合恰当介入

(1)①I used to play ping-pong a lot in my spare time.Now I am interested in football.

②I used to play ping-pong a lot in my spare time.but now I am interested in football.

以上根据两个单句间的并列关系或转折关系,合并成有相应关系的并列句。

(2)I hope you come and sec for yourseff some day.

(3)You want to know what is going on in schools in China.

以上为含宾语从句的复合句。

(4)The main subjects I studied at school included...

(5)The flat is in a building on Fangcao Street,which is not far from Jiaxin Chinese School.

以上为含定语从句的复合句。

(6)As we came to the crossroads a young man and a girl came up and stopped us.

(7)Before we knew it,we had to say good-bye to the workers.

以上为含时间状语从句的复合句

(8)The meal was so nice that we all enjoyed it very much.

含结果状语从句的复合句

(9)Hope you don't have to wait as long as we did.

含比较状语从句的复合句

(10)Hope things have begun to improve since schools were called on to reduce the learning load.

四、衔接自然化

评分标准把衔接和连贯作为核心标准,有效而恰当地使用连接词是衡量是否衔接连贯的重要标准之一。我们应根据所写文章的内容。按照时间先后、空间顺序、逻辑关系、因果关系,弄清所写内容之间的内在联系,切莫按照要求中的提示顺序来组篇,一定要加以适当调整。然后加入构成语篇组带的过渡词串句成文,从而使所写的文章前后连贯,结构紧凑,语义贯通,过渡自然,环环相扣,层次清晰,逻辑分明,不留痕迹,自然成文。现将中学阶段应掌握的过渡语以及高考书面表达范文中出现的例句总结如下:

(一)表起始的过渡语有first of all,to begin with,in my/our opinion,according to,so far,as far as.

(1)As far as I know,everyone is happy about this new arrangement of things.

(二)表时间的过渡语有at first,then,later,meanwhile,in the end,finally,after that,since then,for the first time,at last,as soon as,the next moment,in the past,at present,in the future等。

(2)After that I went to No.8 Middle School of Dalian and graduated this summer.

(3)Firstly,the technology of...secondly,people's income has...Thirdly,mobile phones are...

(三)表空间的过渡语有on the right/left,to the right/left of,on one side of...on the other side of...,at the foot/top/end of,in the middle/center of等。

(4)On one side of the road there is a new classroom building.

On the other side,where the playground used to be now stands another new building-our library.

(四)表因果的过渡语有for,because of,thanks to,one reason is that...another reason is that...,thus,so,therefore,as a result(of…)等。

(5)So come on,stand here.

(五)表转折的过渡语有but,yet,however,on the contrary,except for,in spite of,otherwise,after all,in fact等。

(6)But we didn't know them.

(7)They suggest,however,fees should be charged low.

(六)表列举的过渡语有for example/instance,take...as an example,such as,that is,like,as follows,in other words,and so on等。

(8)I can follow my own interests such as reading books,visiting museums and taking computer lessons.

(七)表推进的过渡语有what's more,further more,on one hand,...one the other hand...,in addition to,as well,still,also,not only...but also...,besides,even,moreover等。

(9)What's more,I can go to bed earlier.

(10)I used to have to work even at weekends doing endless homework and attending classes as well.

五、布局精细化

所谓谋篇布局就是根据题目要求,在全面理解所要求内容基础上勾画全篇写作轮廓,分清楚文章应该写几个方面,或几个段落。在高考书面表达中,尤其是规定情景作文、图表作文、说明文、描写记叙文和实用文体作文等类型,精细化的谋篇布局显得尤为重要。有心人才能真正做到结构严谨,令人耳目一新。精细化要求我们在写作时要注重部分内容与主题思想的一致性,也就是说,不管一篇文章从多少个方面进行论述和解释,都必须紧紧围绕主题进行,每一部分都是依据文章的主题和中心思想展开的,而且在内容和写法上是相互照应和互为补充的。其目的只有一个,就是全面、完整、准确、透彻地阐明文章的中心思想。以2001年考研作文例文为例:

Among all the worthy feelings of mankind,love is probably the noblest.开门见山,点出主题。随后几段中都设有主题句。

As is shown in the picture,“love is a lamp which is brighter in darker places.”

You have given love which is like a lamp in a dark place where light is most needed.

最后进一步深化主题so to come to a conclusion,we need offer our help to those in need.从而使整篇文章段落划分得当,行文连贯,层层递进,结构紧凑,深然一体,显示作者匠心独运。

总之,写好书面表达非一日之功,需平日知识多加积累和勤加练习,同时在做书面表达,写笔成文之际,对以上五个方面详加揣摸,细心体会,终有一日,写出的文章像风行水上来得自然亮丽。

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