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(1)What is the essence of the life?How to lead a meaningful
and colorful life?This topic has been discussed the answer of
which also has been pursued for a long time,as if it were an
eternal topic for us youth.
(2)The following is one aspect of the life I dig out by my
own experience.The time should go back to 1997-1999,in which I
was always in a tense environment,or more actually,a smokeless
battlefield-every student in my class buried themselves in the
book hill all day,as busy as a bee,burning midnight oil was
even a common thing.They would rush downstairs the instant the
second class ended in the afternoon.And then the campus was
soaked with intensity and vigor.In the garden,beneath the tree,
by the river,there were students reading books,loud or silent.
Nothing was attracted with them.Admittedly I was indeed under
great pressure,and had no way to go.The only and best way for
me to go,at that time was to adjust myself to this serious
environment.The purpose then,for me and my classmates,was to
pass the National Entrance Examination.A purpose here works!
(3)And later I was admitted to a famous military college,
taking it for granted that I would free from much exercise,
enjoying my colorful college life.However,to my great surprise,
when I recalled the past time occasionally,I clung to it with
heavy emotion!I was startled by my own such feeling.I was trying
to seek an answer.A trains of happened things occurred to my
mind,during which I was a freshman.I hated to have weekend,
because I was at loss as what to do,where to go.I had no idea
how to spend my college time properly and effectively.I was
puzzled.In the end,fortunately I became used to this kind of
life,and also made a clear plan for my rosy future.A purpose
was in need,and also helped me out of fix.
(4)Now,at this very moment I am brightened with the answer.
Through those day's life,I have been trained to be confident,
to be persistent,to be brave,enough to face any difficulty.
Pressure made me active and positive,never to make a concession
to it.The past experience is a large amount of wealth to me,
just like a book rich in idea and beauty to a scholar,and I
will make use of it to full advantage.
(5)Now to those who are in seemingly terrible fix,I should
say,don't be negative,just be a little ambitious and active.No
mountain in the world can not be over come!No bolts of
lightening that came from the heavens and changed our lives!
Only you can help yourself!
修改搞：
(1)英美人喜欢“直来直去”，第一段是典型中的中式感叹，故删去，
也不再修改。
(2)The following is one aspect of life I have dug out through
my own experience.The time was 1997-1999,a period in which I
was always under great stress,as if I were on a smokeless
battlefield.Every student in my class buried themselves（注：
现代英语中every作限定词时，后面的反身代词也可用themselves，以
避免himself和herself的性别困扰。）in books all day,and burnt
the midnight oil.In the garden,beneath the trees,by the river,
there were always students reading books.Nothing else
attracted their attention.I was under great pressure myself,
and had no way to get rid of it.I could not help but adjust
to this environment.Our goal then was to pass the National
Entrance Examination,a goal that was met!
(3)Later,I was admitted to a famous military college,
taking it for granted that I would enjoy a colorful college
life free from stress.However,to my surprise,when I recalled
the past occasionally,I clung to it with heavy emotion!I was
startled by this feeling and tried to find out the cause.At
first I hated the weekends,because I did not know what to do.I
had no idea how to make use of my college time properly and
effectively.Fortunately I soon adapted to this kind of life,
and also made plans for my future.Once again I have a purpose,
and it has helped me out of the fix.
(4)Now,at this very moment,I am aware of the answer.the period
from 1997-1999 taught me to be confident,persistent and brave,
to face any difficulty.Pressure made me active and positive,and
I never give in to it.This experience has brought wealth to me,
just like a book rich in ideas and beauty does to a scholar,and
I will make full use of it.
(5)Now to those who are seemingly in trouble.I say,don't be
discouraged,be courageous and active.No mountain in the world
cannot be conquered!Only you can help yourself!
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