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多数考生的作文有一个共同的特点:句子平淡无奇,没有任何新意可言,文章千篇一律。那么,如何改变这种状况呢?
第一,试着改变一下每个句子的开头。
1.以形容词或形容词组开头
如:①Mary was very pleased and telephoned her mother.
→Pleased,Mary telephoned her mother.
②The girt,hungry and thirsty,went back home.
→Hungry and thirsty,the girl went back home.
2.以副词开头
如:The child stayed there quietly.
→Quietly,the child stayed there.
3.以不定式开头
如:He got up very early to catch the bus.
→To catch the bus,he got up very early.
4.以现在分词或过去分词开头
如:①I was filled with anticipation when I came home from school that dark winter's day so long ago.
→Coming home from school that dark winter's day so long ago,I was filled with anticipation.
②If you give me enough time,I can do it well.
→Given enough time,I can do it well.
5.以介词短语开头
如:Chester like many other adventurers had experienced fear and conquered it.
→Like many other adventurers.Chester had experienced fear and conquered it.
6.以同位语开头
如:Sue,our monitor,always likes giving suggestions to everybody.
→Our monitor,Sue,always likes giving suggestions to everybody.
7.以从句开头
如:①Francis had already surprised his friends several times before he sailed round the world single-handed.
→Before he sailed round the world single-handed,Francis had already surprised his friends several times.
②You will greatly improve your finished product if you have a quality control inspection.
→If you have a quality control inspection,you will greatly improve your finished product.
第二,改变一下句子的类型,把简单句、并列句和复合句混合在一起使用。如下面的一小段例文:
I have often wondered whether some people,who had no intention of making a purchase,would take advantage of this privilege.One day I asked this question to the shop girl,and I learned it was indeed the case.
第三,改变句子的长度。
短句子适用于表述概念,陈述事实,增强论述的力度;长句子经常用于描写,解释和论述一个完整的情况。如:
Economy is the art of making the most of life.
Love is as necessary to the human being as food and shelter.
There were still situations in which I couldn't be certain my decision had been the right one.but I had learned to accept this as a constant problem for a surgeon,one that could never be completely resolved-and I could live with it.
尽量使自己的文章的长短句结合,不要一味地使用短句或一味地使用长句,否则会使人感到句子过于简单或过于晦涩。
综合上述三点,试着把自己的句子作一些调整,其实只是简简单单的变化,可收到的效果会是大不一样的。
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